This Sentence Has Five Words: A Lesson from Gary Provost on Varying Sentence Length

5 August 2014 — 13 Comments
This short example from Gary Provost demonstrates what happens when a writer experiments with sentences of different lengths, as quoted in Writing Tools: 50 Essential Strategies for Every Writer by Roy Peter Clark.

This Sentence Has Five Words – Gary Provost

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Gary Provost was born in 1944 and died in 1995. He was the author of many books across a range of genres including four award-winning young adult novels. Provost was also a highly sought after writing instructor and published a number of writing advice books including Make Every Word Count (Writers Digest Books, 1980). Read more about Gary Provost at garyprovost.com, a site established and maintained by his wife Gail.

 


13 responses to This Sentence Has Five Words: A Lesson from Gary Provost on Varying Sentence Length

  1. I love love love this! Is it weird that I always look at my sentence lengths when I’m writing. Super interesting. Thank you for sharing!

  2. Alan is right. If anything, it could use a semi-color right before “it is important” at the end.

  3. No semi-colon The sentence reads “sounds that say listen to this” “sounds that say this is important.” A semi-colon would indicate that “this is important” is not the object of “sounds that say” and would change the entire meaning of the sentence.

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